To explain what this poem is about, the poem is mostly about missing certain people that you love. If read carefully, one can take this poem in many different ways. For me after starting to connect with some of my friends from high school, I realized that it had been years since I have heard from them. Another reason for this poem, is if you lose someone that you love, due to death you start to miss them and wish they were around to talk to. I also wrote this poem, for that it deals with couples who are married or those who are not married, that if you are away from them for more than a day or two you start to miss them. The poem is a conversation between two people as a couple, going back and forth. The poem is also based off of a song that I heard by a certain Rock Pop group. (Will not name the group or song.) It is also based off of, ever so often, if you get ignored by a certain someone; you start to feel alone, sad, hurt and sometimes on the depressed side. So, I do hope that this poem helps everyone of my friends and family. Here is the poem.
"When we don't see each other."
By Sara Marie McMurdie
I know that when we don't see each other we both hurt and feel very much alone.
When I don't see you, I am always feeling sad and I cry for you.
When you don't see me, are you feeling sad and do you cry for me?
When I don't see you, it feel like forever for me.
When you don't see me, does it feel like forever for you?
When I don't see you, I always miss you very much.
When you don't see me, do you always miss me very much?
When I don't see you, I wish you would call me and talk to me.
When you don't see me, do you wish I would call you and talk to you?
When I don't see you, I wish I could write you a letter and send it to you.
When you don't see me, do you wish you could write me a letter and send it to me?
When I don't see you, I wish you were in front of me.
When you don't see me, do you wish I was in front of you?
When I don't see you, secretly, in my mind, I am watching you.
When you don't see me, secretly, in my mind, are you watching me?
When I don't see you, I am afraid that something bad had happend to you.
When you don't see me, are you afraid that something bad has happened to me?
When I don't see you, I pretend that I am with you.
When you don't see me, are you pretending to be with me?
When I don't see you, I wonder where you are and what you are doing.
When you don't see me, do you wonder where I am and what I am doing?
When I don't see you, I am always thinking of you.
When I don't see me, are you always thinking of me?
When we don't see each other, I miss you as a friend, as you miss me as a friend.
When we don't see each other, we cannot wait until the next time we meet again.
But most of all, when we don't see each other, know that I will still always love you, as I know that you will still always love me.
Love always,
Sara Marie McMurdie
This is a good one.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice way to put your feelings into words.
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